Nate A *[{Revenge isnt Sweet}]*

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I LOVE insert cards but idk if i should get this. what do you think?

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lKwhMY7PCiU&feature...

aluminous sunrise comes as the love flies/

into the breeze of the world's cries, look at the girl's eyes/

which once shone in the sun like a chosen one/

now they fall victim to the cold gun, "at least its not the son that dies"/

says dad, looks like he's not even sad to begin with/

the trouble all started on the fifth of may, on that fateful day/

dad thought she went out to play, but Lord knows different/

she wanted to sniff it, see what the hype was, if she liked the buzz/

she thought it was hot because not only did she sniff it, no/

she got addicted her body constricted just as the dealers predicted/

not after long her nose began to bleed/

she called it the red juice she liked to see, a sign of the addictive degree/

I think he was a true inspiration to many people but others just see him as a "commie scum" or a murderer... i did my research and know he killed many people but he is also a symbol of rebellion and revolution... i find him to be a great man

what do all of you think?

i sorta wrote it to this but its really not that great... i cant find a good one for this

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Q11_2JtXvbA

thoughts are invisible like shadows on the sun/

my goal is to show soul through passion, let the cash run/

in the sun of a sunny field in the mind, of a confined/

kind of man, had his whole life planned, but then/

the lower half caved in, cant feel feet slap the pavement/

his dreams sent six feet too young, felt like God had him strung/

like a puppet, playing with him, he had to junk ****/

whoda thunk it, two wheels sailed across the floor/

trying to prove his mind could do more then just deplore/

his feet swinging, confined to a chair, once heard fair/

was a place in texas, where, the biggest pig wins a prize/

the whole thing came as a surprise, never in his eyes/

could he see "this cant happen to me", never thought he was free/

until he realized only now was he in bars, no more physical/

but his mind could travel to mars, and back, matter of fact/

he kinda liked that, he could do more then just run, he could write that/

invite that, idea to a cup of tea, and then maybe, he could see/

what his brain could be, could do, when it thought freely/

and when tea was through, he knew the advantages/

his mind could heal a wound better then bandages, the plan switches/

from bad to good, he had a map with no glitches, nothing could/

nothing would, hed fight it, ignite it, then write it/

book of passionate, internal clash in it, the story of a guy/

who said goodbye to a past life, where he stabbed like a knife/

body full of strife, now he knew what his body couldnt do/

married his conclusion like a wife, his hateful mind was through/

the flame within was true, he could do more then just get good parking/

the idea was sparking, limbic barking, howling, like a wolf on a full moon/

more pages would come soon, two months later he was through/

he would conclude with a comment not crude, unrude/

"not regretful was the brood, finding my way was result of the feud"

tell me what needs to be worked on like my flow, voice etc. and how i can improve

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KE26agTBMmc

has anyone else noticed that we're not alone is about aliens and ish? lmfao i just realized that not too long ago just made me laugh what do you think?

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=UNN-zhD1W7I

i go to bed the same way i wake up, pissed off/

life is full of hate and im just the latest victim that its cast off/

my heart feels like blacktop, like the lungs of a cancer patient/

like a crack addict, im back at, thinkin damn i made it/

with a can i sprayed it, played it, off like nothing/

but the truth was something, in fact im bumping/

the songs that make reality seem far away, like the God we pray/

to, stay true to my words, they deep thought not syrup slirs/

the truth hurts, deep cuts, spewing milky guts/

minds combust, no trust no faith, death took its place/

love is what i chase, traveling through time at my own pace/

skimming through the forests of grace, hiding my shamed face/

the distance all figured out, first the cream, then we shout

rate, hate what can i do better?

heres the beat

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4COiiDXkgBM

and verse:

your heart doesn't go wrong, she just knows, she just flows/

life's plan will tell you where to go, pick your part in this show/

eternal thoughts lead the way, like sunlight on a cloudy day/

a road you yourself convey, off the beaten path on your own a stray/

a pawn in a chess game played by the man in the clouds/

the mind wonders where joy abounds, where sounds/

become reality, feel like trouble follows me, growth so heavenly/

living under God's decree, river, rainbow, flower/

scared of change so I cower, the clock stands still in this hour/

the world erupts within its power/

hunger hovers its hands over the happily divine, knowing they'll be fine/

its just a matter of time, up in heaven lookin down "the world is mine"

1-10 TELL ME WHAT I NEED TO IMPROVE ON!!

please tell me something

finish school?

sit back watch the clock wind down to zero

conclusion is my mind is numb, drum roll im the hero, kinda queer though

cuz when the clock was at one i was supposed to run and gun

but when i took my shot it was one and done

bright as the sun, dark as the night

my light flickered but then it went out of sight

fright turned to anger, anger into hate

thought it was fate ****** found few reasons for

my demise, tried to demonize everything but the floor

but when that stopped me too i wished the floor was no more

inspiration was gone, thought i had drawn, my conclusion

but the confusion became the solution

and like a switch i was turned on, flame burned strong

like a candle i handle every situation with a burning passion

wear my heart on my sleeve like it's the new fashion

my mind is clashin, water and fire, the hotter the drier

lyrics rip wire, no more commercial desire

when you go commercial theres no reversal, make my rhymes work so

hard it, feels if the worlds on they shoulders, they tryin to hold us

control us, no fuss, no pain, its all the same

no pain no gain, dont refrain from speakin your brain

or you'll be played like a cd, who need weed

when the sound stay strong, still slept on

win a fight with the pen as my weapon, pad as the shield

only true warriors get to wield the blade, not a rapper gettin paid

one hit wonder, one song, the rest all wrong

feedback good, back, improvements, suggestions

Bright like the mind of Farakhan, walk into the room with armor on

keep protected so if i get rejected the karma gone

grip the sword with all five fingers, i'll bring us

to the daylight, been preparin all night

cant you see the fright?, its in theyre eyes caught um off gaurd, by surprise

stuck in the cave of my mind but the warrior is without fear

the end is near, but he cant feel it, that' s the deal its

his time to feel this, power in his blue flowing veins

like a river in his mind the thoughts flow the same

lead his people, the need to, finish the game, live up to his name,

conquer the desires of fortune and fame

he must defeat the concrete jungle but even then things wont be the same

first obstacle is impossible its unprobable

the mind is the weapon enemy learned his lesson

its tactical attacks verse forced aggression

thatd be one verse but id finish off the story

feedback, good, bad, suggestions?

Bright like the mind of Farakhan, walk into the room with armor on

keep protected so if i get rejected the karma gone

grip the sword with all five fingers, i'll bring us

to the daylight, been preparin all night

cant you see the fright?, its in theyre eyes caught um off gaurd, by surprise

stuck in the cave of my mind but the warrior is without fear

the end is near, but he cant feel it, that' s the deal its

his time to feel this, power in his blue flowing veins

like a river in his mind the thoughts flow the same

lead his people, the need to, finish the game, live up to his name,

conquer the desires of fortune and fame

he must defeat the concrete jungle but even then things wont be the same

first obstacle is impossible its unprobable

the mind is the weapon enemy learned his lesson

its tactical attacks verse forced aggression

ill finish off the story but that would be a verse

feedback, improvements, anything im doin good, bad?

heres another verse i wrote this like 3 days ago id say

rule the empire with a cruelty unknown

no one will takes the throne

away from me, cuz i'll always be

the one the only, forever holy

like the grail

found out my grandma died through an email

that turned me forever stale

heart cold, so im told

everything that glitters isnt gold

didnt believe it in the past

put my life on blast

hopefully the happy memories will last

used to wish time went by fast

but now i see, the years should, be a jubilee

people seein through me

hopefully the hope in me

will poke holes in the sky

momma askin why

with the war in iraq

when my husband comin back

its a tragedy, the sad in me

shining through

feedback

brain sendin signals to the arm to the hand then the pen

the pen then spits its semen on the pad im writin in

me myself and i are the only ones that know whats within

we run with guns up in ya building

what people call true thugs cuz we killing

scratch that out and write the truth

write about something from my youth

i feel its my time to bring whats been missing

heal the crime that keeps insuing

see it all through my iris

gotta find out whos behind this

put the tape back and rewind the track

listinin for wack words syrup slurs

cant really think of a way to finish it

okay first time postin the lyrics... leave honest feedback... wack, good, and some things i can improve on

not much excitement in this section so i thought id take the liberty in spicing things up.... anyone up for a rap tourni?

just yes yes or w/e as ur answer and ill see how many people we got

Somobe

CunninLynguists

Blu & Exile (yall better have)

CYNE

Jay Who?

DJ Shadow

Mr.Lif

NY Oil

Panacea

Snowgoons

then of course asher roth, charles hamiton blah blah blah

havnt been here in a minute and just tryin 2 get caught up on guys u guys have heard of in the underground hip hop scene

anyone im missin out on thats new?

can anyone explain how to make loops on the mpd32 with garageband? i wana know how to make live loops and i cant figure it out

i need some msn or aim robots that you can actually have a convo with... my friend says he'll pay if i can find one lol

i need some ideas for a good friend