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  • Let me know your thoughts....?

    Gingerly sweet the whisper seeps

    Through the forest so deep

    Beyond the king of three winters go

    A freshly fallen virgin snow

    Deep in the abyss kindles a spark

    Can you hear the silenced lark?

    Soft and tender my journey's step

    To the old woman who has wept

    The perilous forest is unforgiving

    Especially to those among the living

    Weeping still she rests near the stream

    Echoes not her grieving scream

    Curious eyes watch in sorrow

    for none know what comes the morrow

    Upon bended knee in the moon's glow

    A solitary tear to the stream below

    She cradles the warrior like a child

    Deep within this forest so wild

    Tarnished armour blades of rust

    So fragile this tender trust

    Linger long her mournful sobs

    For a life the gods have robbed

    Brave warrior of old all agree

    But fate comes to even thee.

    5 AnswersPoetry1 decade ago
  • I shaped up my earlier writing based on suggestions, how does it look now?

    Keep in mind before you read this, and it will be painfully obvious to many, I am not a writer and in forty years I cared not to read anything fiction....so with that, let me know your thoughts and constructive critics.

    Gingerly sweet the whisper seeps

    Through the forest so deep

    Beyond the king of three winters go

    A freshly fallen virgin snow

    Deep in the abyss kindles a spark

    Can you hear the silenced lark?

    Soft and tender my journey's step

    To the old woman who has wept

    The perilous forest is unforgiving

    Especially to those among the living

    Weeping still she rests near the stream

    Echoes not her grieving scream

    Curious eyes watch in sorrow

    for none know what comes the morrow

    Upon bended knee in the moon's glow

    A solitary tear to the stream below

    She cradles the warrior like a child

    Deep within this forest so wild

    Tarnished armour blades of rust

    So fragile this tender trust

    Linger long her mournful sobs

    For a life the gods have robbed

    Brave warrior of old all agree

    But fate comes to even thee.

    1 AnswerMythology & Folklore1 decade ago
  • What do you think of my writings?

    Gentle and sweet the whisper seeps in the forest so deep beyond where

    the king of three winters grow in the forest so dark there lies a spark.

    Can you hear the silenced lark?

    Soft and tender is my step to the old woman who has wept for the things

    she has not kept. The forest is unforgiving for those among the living

    but there she sits at the singing spring defiant to her fears and still

    can she hear?

    Curious eyes watch in sorrow for none know what brings on the morrow.

    I kneal in the fern in the moon's glow and feel the tear trickle below.

    She cradles the warrior like a child deep within this forest so wild.

    Limb to limb, root to root I dance but not once did our eyes meet to

    chance. In the moss they search for what is lost, their way distorted

    and amiss to find a place like this.

    Rustle the leaves for my whispers are free. Her sobs tell of the soul

    the gods have robbed, brave he must have been this warrior she cradles.

    Silent feet lead me close within the shadows of her soul.

    "You hear me dont you healer? What will cure his wound grows deep in

    the thistle dew, take my hand for I am no different than you and I will

    show you where they grow. Fear not for your warrior so bold and brave

    for this place will not be his grave if you truly believe."

    5 AnswersPoetry1 decade ago
  • An example of my writings,please make suggestions?

    Gentle and sweet the whisper seeps in the forest so deep beyond where

    the king of three winters grow in the forest so dark there lies a spark.

    Can you hear the silenced lark?

    Soft and tender is my step to the old woman who has wept for the things

    she has not kept. The forest is unforgiving for those among the living

    but there she sits at the singing spring defiant to her fears and still

    can she hear?

    Curious eyes watch in sorrow for none know what brings on the morrow.

    I kneal in the fern in the moon's glow and feel the tear trickle below.

    She cradles the warrior like a child deep within this forest so wild.

    Limb to limb, root to root I dance but not once did our eyes meet to

    chance. In the moss they search for what is lost, their way distorted

    and amiss to find a place like this.

    Rustle the leaves for my whispers are free. Her sobs tell of the soul

    the gods have robbed, brave he must have been this warrior she cradles.

    Silent feet lead me close within the shadows of her soul.

    "You hear me dont you healer? What will cure his wound grows deep in

    the thistle dew, take my hand for I am no different than you and I will

    show you where they grow. Fear not for your warrior so bold and brave

    for this place will not be his grave if you truly believe."

    2 AnswersMythology & Folklore1 decade ago
  • Thoughts on my writing? Opinions?

    Gentle falls the tears of the cloud

    upon the rippled waters of my soul

    Whispers dance upon the breeze

    in a forest where the ancient's weep

    Rustling leaves under tender foot

    shatters the silence of old

    to where the warrior sits alone

    and ponders the sounds of war

    4 AnswersPoetry1 decade ago
  • What year did the northern crusades begin particularly in Finnmark,Norrbotten and Finland?

    I read once an edict from the Pope in 1020 began it for those in northern Sweden and Anund Jakob led an army in 1050 north, but is there proof this is when it started or was it a century later in Finland? Keep in mind,the northern crusades,not middle east.

    1 AnswerHistory1 decade ago